In Search Of Honest Feedback

[St. Paul Yogini]

Sara and Harlan,

I'll echo the thanks of the many others who've posted so far. I found your ad on my YogaJournal.com Daily Insight e-newsletter and have really enjoyed the forums and videos, they are helpful. Thanks for what you're doing!

I'm pasting the text of my craigslist ad below. Too wordy? I am a certified massage therapist and certified yoga teacher, RYT 200, with lots of experience- and success- helping people reduce their daily pain. I'd like to focus on pain relief for my private sessions. I'm new to attracting privates, sort of. I have done many "privates" with my bodywork clients, sharing the tools of yoga etc. with them to address their pain.

What do you think? Clear or muddy?

thanks for your feedback! BTW- good advice on charging. I am on the lower side- at $65-125 for privates, but know I'm worth that and more. Now I just need the clients!

Title: "Old Age" Pains Are Unnecessary!

Your bone creaking and soreness may not have anything to do with getting older! You do not have to be in constant pain or discomfort. While it