Looking for feedback on Craigs list ad

[LucyAnn]

Hello Everyone, Please feel free to let me know your thoughts about my ad. I have several versions and this is the latest.

subject:
Learn Yoga and get fit! Thursday evenings with Lucy Ann

AD body:
Learn Yoga and start feeling better about yourself.
Classes as low as $12.00

Thursday Evenings at 7 pm till 8:30 pm with Lucy Ann

Located between McDonalds and the Dodge Dealer
in the Westminster Professional Center, Suite 302

Mind Your Body Yoga class is dedicated to address weight loss and how to mind your body. The class is open to anyone, any shape or size, with a basic knowledge of yoga and the desire for a healthy body and mind. Students will be guided through a series of postures that flow with a fitness focus and given tools to boost their home practice. This class will encourage students to take charge of their body through yoga. Each weeks' class will relax, tone and invigorate you!

See some of my students comments:
"I just loved your class. I feel so relaxed and
you made it fun." Valerie
"Even though I'm a beginner, you taught me more about what
my body can do and I feel great. Thanks." Dawn
"I really missed your class last week when I couldn't get out in the snow. But you inspired me to push myself further while practicing at home." Stacey
"Great Class. See you next week" Chris

No membership fees. Register online.

Visit our website for more information, directions and map.
Other yoga classes and times available to fit your schedule and needs.

Lucy Ann teaches at
The Santosha School of Yoga in Westminster, Maryland (Carroll County)
443-838-3534 (532 Baltimore Boulevard, Suite 302)
http://www.santoshaschool.com/

Private yoga classes available. $85.00 per student per class.
Private class for two students $125.00 for both per class. Group rates available.

Location:
532 Baltimore Boulevard

[LucyAnn]

Okay... I can see by reading several other posts that I need to spruce up my ad. Remove yoga, note benefits, develop catch line as to why read the ad in the first place and remove the prices. so much to learn.

I'll render a new version and then see what everyone thinks.

I have a new class that I'm teaching to write a whole new ad, so I suppose I'll start there. I also want to write some for my fellow teachers to help promote the studio.

Thanks and much love,
Lucy

[LucyAnn]

Overweight, Tired and Achy? Bring yourself back to easy contentment.

Seek to lose weight, to look and feel better, to help relieve symptoms of chronic fatigue syndrome, depression, or to become physically stronger. Whatever your reasons, with time you'll find that you can experience the following benefits:

Increase flexibility and strength

Reduce stress levels and tension in the body

Regulate moods and emotions

Ease backache

Improve self-confidence, self-awareness, and empathy

Strengthen the immune system

Sleep better

Evening class of stretching and postures with focus on proper skeletal and muscular alignment to ease your aching back, tight shoulders and neck. You will be taught to listen to your body, recognize limitations, and learn to move your own body. For all abilities and ages.

Call to reserve your place or contact us with any questions.
410-857-0890
Thursdays at 7:00 pm to 8:30 pm
532 Baltimore Blvd, Suite 302
Westminster, MD 21157
(Rt. 140 between McDonald's and the Dodge Dealership in the Westminster Professional Center)

New students receive one
FREE 'Bonus' class when you
mention this Craigs list ad.
(Valued at $18.00)

Check or cash accepted at the studio. No credit cards at this time.

Where comfortable loose fitting clothes. A t-shirt and knit pants are fine. No special shoes.

Classes run from Thursday, April 12th through Thursday, June 7th. Future sessions upcoming.

Visit our website for more details.
http://www.santoshaschool.com
Where contentment is experienced at every class.
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Please let me know your thoughts on the ad. If its fine or needs adjusting. So far no responses yet, but I don't know how people search on craigs list. I thought key words in the title would help, but not sure.
Thanks,
Lucy Ann