review my website

[bdesmone]

Hi,

Please review my website: www.b-yoga.net

Thank you,

Barb

[Administrator]

b 4 I get started, let me just say the opening of the website
is really weak.

The concept we teach is "What's In It For Me?"

But the beginning of the website - which is the most important part - is about a play on words that doesn't mean anything to prospects.

There's no wine and romance.

There are no benefits.

This website needs some serious work.

Sorry.

Harlan

[bdesmone]

Hi,

I've made some changes to my website, please review for me. I appreciate your time and advice.

Beach yoga Emerald Isle North Carolina

Barbara

[Administrator]

Welcome to b.yoga,inc. Offering studio classes, private classes and beach yoga to the beautiful Crystal Coast.

Whether you are an absolute beginner or an experienced yoga student, you can enjoy practicing yoga while living or traveling to the beach.

If you are a tennis player with tight hamstrings, a runner with shin splints, or a surfer who wants to increase flexibility and balance, b.yoga,inc. can help you balance and strengthen your mind and body.

Find relief from lower back pain, neck tension and shoulder tightness with yoga.


Ok, that's your best stuff. But you hide it at the bottom of your website. The pictures look great. Bring the benefits up so the first thing they see is a headline with benefits and then the picture.

Barbara Desmone OD, CYI, CYT-C, CPI

Barbara, I'll give $100 to your favorite charity if you can find a new client who knows that those abbreviations mean.

I googled OD and found it has 58 meanings. You are either a doctor of optometry or a member of OpusDei.

Just say something like Certified Yoga Teacher / Instructor and that's all.

No one cares about the number of hours whether it's 200, 500, or 10,000.

The concept to keep in mind is to keep the good stuff on your website in the first screen so you can hook them as you scroll.

Peace.

Harlan

[bdesmone]

Hi,

I'll make the changes. I wondered about all the abreviations. Now I have the answer.

Thanks again,

Barb

[bdesmone]

Hi,

I've made more changes. Any further suggestions?

Thanks,

Barb

[Administrator]

Barb,

exactly what do you want people to do when they come to your website.

think about your answer...

what exactly are you ASKING them to do?

Namaste.

Harlan