using craigslist for retreat

[sharon]

Hi Harlan,

I posted this ad yesterday on craigslist and I would love to get some feedback from you. I wasn't sure how long to make the ad. I could have added more info. but I didn't want to make it a book! Thanks in advance :-)

Tranquility in the Tropics

Imagine this

[Administrator]

Here's the good news - it's a good ad.

Here's the bad news - I'm not sure Craigslist is where people go when
they are looking for a vacation.

I would put up a website with pictures and use Pay Per Click advertising
to get traffic there.

Good writing however....

Namaste.

Harlan