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[sweetness71]

Greetings Harlan,

Will you review my ad below and tell me if I need to make any changes. I've gotten some hits but maybe I need to spice it up a little to get even more. I signed up 3 students who saw my ad. Here it is:

Are you looking to relieve stress, tone your body, release tension, increase flexibilty or take care of your overall well-being? Well, I have just the remedy for you. Gentle stretching, breathing, meditation, and guided relaxation releases tension and calms the nervous system. Holding yoga postures will create dynamic tension which tones every part of the body, including massaging our internal organs. Yoga eliminates toxins and exercises the glands, organs, and endocrine system which increases circulation. Last, but, certainly not least yoga gently stretches the muscles increasing flexibility and lengthening the muscles, tendons, and ligaments. Come and try a complimentary class!!! Please send an email to the above address for days and times of classes

[Administrator]

Hi Sweetness, (Just hope my wife doesn't see this... but she's "Honey" so I'm safe)

First, getting three people to respond to an ad is a very good sign.

It means you can really build a business that way.

So like they said for the shampoo, wash, rinse and repeat. (They doubled sales by the way.)

Second, the more you tell, the more you'll sell.

Tell them something about yoga.

Read many of the ciritques I've posted on the board.

Keep us informed as to your progress.

Namaste.

Harlan

[sweetness71]

Thanks Harlan. I will definitely keep you guys informed. Thanks again for the feedback.

Namaste
Sweetness