Website Review

[jocelyngordon]

Harlan and Sara

I appreciate your site, as well as, the time and attention you give your subscribers. When you have the chance, please review my site - LoveMovement Healing Arts: Welcome!

I would like your feedback on it's user friendliness.

Thank you.

Be Well!

Jocelyn

[Administrator]

Oh my gosh...

When I had my Lasik surgery, they told me I might see floaters.

I never saw any until I came to your site.



but then when I looked back at my screen, it got worse...



The floaters were everywhere.

I've never seen anything like it in my life.

First thing, kill the floaters.

Second, why should someone sign up for your newsletter?

There's no reason given at all!

Third, you are trying to make your site do everything at the same time.

Yoga, Dance, Life Coaching...

It's too much. Focus on one thing at a time on your home page
and if you are buying traffic with pay per click, bring them to seperate
pages for dance and life coaching.

Second, more detail and conversational style.

I'm going to teach a seminar to graduating yoga students so I'll be back later with more thoughts.

For now, get rid of the floaters.

Namaste.

Harlan

[shel]

Hi! I am a brand new Yoga instructor. I was wondering if you would be able to give me your expert advice and tell me what you think of my website. Soular Shine Yoga

I'd appreciate it!

Thanks!

Peace,

Shelsea

[Administrator]

This is easy.

You have six seconds for someone coming to your website to make a decision to stay or leave.

Get rid of the flash.

Now for the main page...

You don't really say anything on your opening page.

What exactly are you offering? Classes, Privates?

Soular Shine Yoga is an integrative approach to awakening both mind and body awareness. Invigorating the senses and calming the mind. Let your soul shine!

This is all jargon. Speak english. There are no benefits.

On your instructor page, make the top photo one of you in a yoga pose.

Your shine page needs a significant amount of work.

Most of your website needs a rewrite. You think you are writing to other people already into yoga.

That's not your market.

Shanti.

Harlan

[shel]

Thank You so Much!

[shel]

One more thing...What about craigslist ads...Can you give you opinon on my recent ad on craigslist FITNESS Instructors!
I just recently took on a role as Yoga Instructor/Fitness Manager. I was quite proud of this article. But for some reason I am getting 0 responses. Any suggestions??

Om Shanti,

Shelsea

[Administrator]

The first problem is your headline.

This should go in the employment section.

And make the headline more sexy so people are interested:

Only For Fitness Instructors Who Want To Earn More $$$

Try different sections.

No one is opening your ad.

Shanti

Harlan

[Bharati]

I would appreciate your input.

Yoga LBI - home

Blessings,

Bharati

[Administrator]

Hi, way too much yoga jargon.

You can stop hanging by your fingernails to the ups and downs of life and become the observer, watching yourself enjoy the rollercoaster ride. Find balance, acceptance and joy through the practice of yoga.

This is yoga jargon. Talk to them in terms of specific benefits. Get more detailed.

Enter the conversation going on in their mind.

Show pictures of people doing yoga - people are interested in this.

Peace.

Harlan