new website review

[stephanie]

Will you check my new website and let me know what you think? www.dragonflyoga.com Thanks!

[Administrator]

Your website is off to a good start.

Here are some suggestions...

Your website takes up the entire screen. I believe if there are margins
on the right and left, it will be easier to read.

Second, your website should have a benefit rich headline.

Private yoga lessons is not a benefit.

Freedom through self discovery is not a benefit and doesn't really say anything practical.

But all in all, your site shows some good potential and these are simple changes for you to make.

Hope you'll let us see the rewrite when it's ready.

Peace.

Harlan

[stephanie]

I took your suggestions and fixed the margins. I also changed the headline. I have plans to create some information pages and will post again when I get them up. If you have any other suggestions I would be grateful!

Peace, Stephanie

www.dragonflyoga.com

[Administrator]

Hi Stephanie,

It's much better now.

Keep adding benefits to your opening page.

Get some testimonials from happy satisfied clients.

Peace.

Harlan